1.
Black shells
and trepidations
ribs of vision
blue…dehydrated
I walk from your limbs
to limbs
…downhill eyes
to those fat lips
Row me
till water is high
and I drown
like a dead submarine…
2.
I have dug your
navel
bits of jewels and
tidy dreams
a brisk temper
enlightening my castle…
ashes of prayer
like salted petals
crisp red in
a big brown chest
termites nibbling
my soft
sad eyes…
3.
The naked pine
sharp over
some bleeding soil
tongue sweeping
bristles on your face
milk raining down
blind canvases
and across
The event of church
down the pelvic
a tomb-
a bliss of orchid and
poisoned raisins
4
An evening
you jerked the caravan
against violet petals
a friction
that crippled
music
and noise
unheard
those foul-birds
pecking at
seeds of sin
5
tongues melting
in the oven
cubes of saliva
burning a
cult
the nestles
below
an organic
smell
feasted by yeast
trained
by libido
and lullabies.
5 comments:
Loved the half revealing allusive imageries in here.The piece dangles in the realms of magic realism......the intoxication and sensuousness is also quite moving.
you are mesmerising. flow on.
I drown .....Like a submarine ( !!!) I am not sure if I like the simile
Beautiful lines, some very impressive, probably remember for quite a number of days and months..
I HAVE DUG YOUR NAVEL...Tidy dreams
ASHES OF PRAYERS
BLIND CANVUS
DOWN THE PELVIS, A TOMB
TONGUES MELTING IN THE OVEN.
Liked the staccato style...
The last stanza is sublime....sublime...
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